Hmmm. I'm quite willing to accept the criticism, but I need to know more in order to understand it. What, specifically, would you have me include that I didn't include or leave out that I included? What words or phrases should have been substituted for worlds or phrases I used?

I would say that the intent of the article was to cover all women's rights. Women's rights to make decisions about their own bodies is a huge part of women's rights, but women should also have a right to equal pay for equal work, the right to do the work they choose to do, the right to live free of violence, the right to vote, the right to own property--all of it. Some of these rights we now have, but may not have in the near future given the Trump win.