This is an EXCELLENT article that will never get boosted unless a mistake in boosting is made. You are using blockquotes (as here) where you should be using subtitles (little-T format). You are putting periods at the ends of subtitles. You are also using blockquoteswhere you should use the simpler quote type. I'm writing this because I'd like to see this article and other ones by you get boosted, not because I want to criticize. Oh, also, unless you have specific permission from McNamara or his publisher to use his photo--in which case you are supposed to indicate that in the image caption--you are in violation of copyright to use it. This is serious in that it is a legal issue.