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This is truly beautiful Saurabh. The only suggestion I would have, as an editor, is that you expand on Anna's stories. Actually, briefly, write a couple of those stories.

You commented on one of my articles, and I noted your bio, which is original and interesting, and then I found this story. Still writing as an editor, I'll edit your bio. You had it as "Good things in life comes with patience n thats’ what all I have." Try, "Good things in life come with patience; that's what I have." (That's what all I have would mean you have nothing but patience.)

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Katharine Valentino
Katharine Valentino

Written by Katharine Valentino

Still trying for the words to help us do & feel good things. Owner of Reviews for Medium Featured Books. I write life stories & about politics / social issues.

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